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| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseoh...well i really hope you're not having those problems anymore...(this was from a while ago so..))I really like this, all the same, it's really realistic.--pammy-x3 |
| method acting 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseLess than three! Um, right on. I think that everyone can relate, even if they don't go to extremes. Like, everyone's felt bad about themselves at one point. Maybe they didn't go bulimic and maybe they didn't go to jesus and all of that, but whatever. I certainly didn't but I can relate. Is it bad that I'm sort of afraid of church? Faith seems so mindless it makes me shiver. Oh God please don't take this as me insult you or your religion or your peice or anything! I just get carried away sometimes and say things. I'm sorry. I like this format, it's simple and vaugely contemporary. Especially the last stanza. The bold/italics and '&' are used delicatly and...nicely. I liked it. Nice job. |
| Hidden Lies 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseNo one should feel that way. Though I have never seen you I am sure you are a very beautiful person, I can tell by you writing also. You are a great person... just remember that. A very nice and expressive poem! |
2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abusedon't worry. you don't need to be perfect for anyone, you need to be perfect to yourself. love who you are. 'cause there's going to be someone who walks into your life, and loves you for you. and loves every ounce of who you are. |
| by His blood 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusei'm really sorry that you're going through this. ♥ you posted this right as i'm starting to have ** up thoughts about eating ... i know how incredibly painful this is, and i know you must have heard this before, but he's not worth it. you seem to have strong faith, and that's amazing -- i hope it will help you through this. i don't know you, but your writing is beautiful, and i'm sure you are. ♥ |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseYup, I know the feeling :-/. Well written, the line breaks are all at good places. I love the ending lines. ~beXie *x* |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseoh, whoa, i can completely relate & i feel the same way. "every time i see him/all i can think about is/the fat sticking out/from the side of my waist" yeah, i know how that feels. you're definitely not alone there, girl. so keep your head up! |
| Cloaked-n-shadow 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abusereally good poem, it sounds like me. eating problems? not good, not good at all... |