This was pretty cool! I liked the flow of it all. I'm pretty new to poetry too, so I know how it feels.

Also, "Um in a can" my be the funniest screenname I've ever seen. How'd you come up with that?

i like it!

wow i loved this! short, sweet , awesome and deep!

Thank You So Much! That comment really meant a lot to me (except the the marriage proposal ;). I really appreciate being added on your favorite's list. Anyway, good poem.

Nice poem! I liked it! Thanx for your review on Torment.