I liked this poem a lot. I could really feel the connection with Watership Down, especially towards the middle. The only part I didn't like was your use of "crystal" in the fourth line. It's such an overused word that to me it was distracting from the rest of the poem.

Thank you for the review. Just here returning the favor =)

I really like the description you used for this one... but I think there's a typo: Is "copse" supposed to be "corpse"? Oh well, we all make that mistake sometimes. I was reading some of your other poems too and I like the creative way you set up the verses... way to use that poetic license! Keep up the good work.