Reviews for What You Don't See

MidnightThief15 2007-11-13 ch 1,	abuseI love this, is well written and easy to connect with.
PocoSnow15 2006-08-01 ch 1,	abuseWow! This was really great! I loved your last line "You have made a monster out of me". It fit so well!
an-angel-in-hell 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseWow. It's like a crescendo of emotion, and the last line is just so powerful... I like it! :]
Cicy Chan 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseBitterness just radiates out of the words... and for this poem, I mean it in a really good way. Awesome work!
unspecified 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseomg i love it. it is so relatable that i could cry.check out my newest peice,"My Rock Is Crumbling"
truefire 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseI wrote something simmilar, so I understand where you're coming from. Very angry, but still good. 10 points for using the word "naught"