Reviews for Falling From the Sky

CapoeiraChic 2006-07-24 ch 6,	Hey i really am enjoying this story! I like how you don't just introduce everyone...its happens over time. This is really great!! Please update!
RayRay and Beanzie 2006-07-24 ch 5,	Nice. Short. I'm sorry but just one thing to say. Not much is happening in the story. I mean-its just a bit slow. This chapter isnt really moving. I just wanted to point it out cause Sam (the other author of our story) told me the same thing, when I was writing a chapter. Keep it up though!
RayRay and Beanzie 2006-07-24 ch 4,	Hey I loved the new chap. Especially the cute little romantic bits. =D Anyways update asap! There were a few mistakes, so just read over and edit before you update next time. Just a tip. Hope you dont mind!
RayRay and Beanzie 2006-07-23 ch 3,	Hey I really like this. The start was a bit...bland but then after the first paragraph it became really good. The written point of it I mean. The idea is great too, and its quite sad about about the father dying. How old are they? And I think it might be good if you introduce all your carachters first. Like, the names. Are they all friends? And what were they going to do in California? What are the "nationals". Like what kinda competition. Yeah so just describe it a bit more but apart from that, i really like it. Update ASAP!