i like how you started it..
"the question is, who do you want to be?"
i like that part in particular. it's direct and it touches everyone.. if it is so often asked to people, not alot could answer that question so straightforwardly..

anyway, i like it.. :]

jolly good - this is really deep, and it really hits on what a lot of people feel. ~leeny

I loved the Prologue. It was very beautifully written, and thought-provoking. A great piece of work.

This prologue is extremely insightful and intriguing and kind of reminiscent of Buddhism, which is weird...I could actually see this prologue kind of as a standalone thing, like maybe something inspirational...is that weird?