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Faerie Tales
2006-11-25
ch 1,
You and your dad make the most lovely stories. You guys have such a... writeable relationship? I can see you writing about this moment in the autobiography you'll be doing once you get famous.

Heh... I love your daddy's boat. And your daddy, him, too.
The Sage of Story
2006-09-22
ch 1,
So you never got to keep your shark and clean it. :[ I'm sorry.

I feel like I'm missing some deep hidden meaning in this or something. "We did catch that shark." (Really?)

But that's the good part about it. I don't have to get it to think it's beautiful. :D Maybe it was just a captured moment, like a lot of your writing.
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