hm. i like it. it's very blunt in what it's saying, but still manages to remain a poem, and not just a rant. Thats a talent to be sure:P

it may .seem. sickening, but from my view, it's beaautiifuull... '(because i haven't felt like this/in such a long time that i can't believe it's real)' that feeling. god, you describe it so well. 'and i'm just waiting for the fingers that will wrap/perfectly around my hand to fill the empty spaces'. that's so sweet, made me go 'aw'... & the ending. the longing, the hope for something so true... i know that feeling so well, and you wrote it so well, especially when it was backed up with such beautiful poetry. this was a great peice. i can relate.

aww...Nicole's in love...are you? lol. I liked this poem _

'it's (almost) sickening how i can't keep/my eyes off of him and the way he makes/my stomach turn from side to side ' i loved those verses.

have you tried talking to him? oh & btw thanx for what you said your last review (it's usually me telling you that, lol), it means a lot.