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| Chaotic Charisma 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow interesting, you kind of attack the American dream and the idea that anyone is doing any good anywhere all in one go, don't you? I watched two hours of Grey's Anatomy last night so maybe that's why this is jumping out at me but I like this one. It's more original and it makes a statement about nobody being perfect, human failure, life, and hope and all that without directly saying anything so cliche. Plus the whole "Mr Dr Surgeon Man" sounds awesome ^_^ And, lastly, I really like the ending, your song sort of dies with the patient that way. I sort of hear it in my head as a spoken bit after the music plays out, but what do I know about music anyway? But I can tell you with official English-major certainty that the lyrics are good. |
| CRaZy-OdIN 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusea very interesting song, well done and very original. I like the last 2 verses and the bridging verse :) keep up the great work. take care |