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| Chaotic Charisma 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseSo this is the fourth thing I've read of yours today and I noticed something. Your thoughtful pieces are getting deeper... but your angsty ones aren't as good as they used to be. Wonder what that says? This is the Lorena one you were talking about? I like it. I can't decide if it's for the imagry, the fact that this one flows really well, the sort of cold tone of this is our right and destiny and we're going to do this because we have to and not because we're angry thing, or if I'm trying to make a religious metaphor out of it. It also could be because it's about something other than what we're living, you know, the desert murder mystery feeling. I know I don't make any sense today... I'm very tired and that's all your fault so deal. Haha anyway nice piece, my favorite of the new ones I've read so far. |
| CRaZy-OdIN 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, simply masterful with words here, I loved it so much. It was so full of beautiful intricate imagery, and it really pushed forward at a fast pace for me. I really loved, keep up the awesome work. that songs going on my favs list. |