shed laughter and tears... I've never heard of shedding laughter.. it seems really odd

I like this piece.. it is a lot of emotion and is very easy to relate to... I also like the rhyming a lot

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That was beautiful and very true.

I hope you will post more poems on here, so we may be able to read more.

Great job and we hope to see more.

Threegirlssameambition

P.S. Thanks for your review and we just updated the story, btw.

this was very nice. thankyou for your review on my poem

Aw, this is so beautifully written. Great work. _ Keep writing. Sara