Very nice. I love the honesty and the realistic sense of it. Goog job :)

that was so good! please let me read that at my wedding reception? please please please!

it was beutiful and your husband must have been non stop smiling at his wife and forever lover...CUTE!

'Knowing I can trust you

All the honesty you give

Emotions that you share with me

Gives me the will to live'

I really like that verse. I wish I had someone like that. :)

what did he say? what he struck by stars (is that how u say it?)

anyways it's really good ;)

i also write poetry. i would love if it u read some of my works ;)

thanks

This was a very touching poem. I like the wording you used and how it shows your thoughts and emotions.

Again good job, and I can see you have talent!

Threegirlssameambition

This is really good.

Nice write!

aw this is very sweet. It reminds me of my boyfriend. Nice piece.

this is a great poem about love. you have some talent chick! keep up the good work, because i can't wait to read more of your work!