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Reviews For: You Are Wide Awake

Mel Masqued
2007-10-13
ch 1,
Wow. How true these words be. Very universal. Very sad.
Jen H.M.
2007-06-05
ch 1,
Wow. This is so well-written it didn't even bother me that it was a little depressing. I love that it's written from such a unique perspective, you're writing to someone, and not about them.
Amara
2006-08-15
ch 1,
Wow. Simply beautiful.

"You go to bed but you are not asleep. You get up but you are not awake. You listen to music but you cannot hear anything. You think but you do not have any thoughts. You watch TV but you see nothing. You read but there are no words. You write but there is no meaning."

"It is important to remember that no one is listening."

Some of the best stuff I've ever read.
calybe
2006-08-13
ch 1,
'Generation Dysthymia. Generation Anxiety. Generation OCD. Generation Celexa. Generation SSRI.' Oh so true.

This is one of the most pain-stakingly true things I've read on FP. I don't think there's even one person who has never felt like this.

'You are aware of everything going on around you, but nothing is aware of you.' This line almost made me cry, and I'm not even sure why.

The whole piece was magnificient.
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