you've written one amazing story. i loved reading it. although those are the verses which speak to most people, you've made it unique... i like these kinds of poems. :)

i like it. touching.~Liz

i am so glad that you have given your burdens to god. that just proves that you are a very strong believer, and strong woman.

i have have tried the whole god thing, but i am still very iffy.wish me luck

great job