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| Sexy vampirechick 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI love your poem.It's so real.Definitely is one of my fav's. |
| kAIT REDFERN 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseLoved the last line "and it will lead to this mind's suicide." I guess it's really tricky if you fall for someone online as you never really "know" them. I enjoyed this, luv Kaitx |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseOo. Wow. I L-O-V-E the AN. And the whole poem, really. The rhyming had a great effect. I SO know what it feels like to like someone (crush or jsut friend) after just an online convo. Apepartently my "best friend forever-twin for life" is this guy who is friends with my friends but now I'm friends with... yeah. Confusing. Haha but yeah. Great job. I loved "And it’ll lead to this mind’s suicide." Just a great line and a terrific ending. I also loved "For proof were pixels." Wow. I just love that. The alliteration of "Proof" and "Pixels." Bravo. |
| Jenny LaTric 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed the line "for proof were pixels". This is a kinda nice taken on internet relationships. |