Great! I loved the repetition of the title at the end. The word itself actually exudes this ominous kind of feeling...haha.

"Hurting when together

Bleeding when apart"

I love those lines. Keep writing!

I like the juxtaposition of pain when the couple is together and when they're apart. Just the right length, nice poem.

Sounds personal. Best not intervene between what ever's going on, but it seems as if I've felt the same way at times.