|Reviews for Forbidden|
| His Mercy's Waiting 2/10/07 . chapter 1
Great! I loved the repetition of the title at the end. The word itself actually exudes this ominous kind of feeling...haha.
"Hurting when together
Bleeding when apart"
I love those lines. Keep writing!
| An Inside Joke 7/24/06 . chapter 1
I like the juxtaposition of pain when the couple is together and when they're apart. Just the right length, nice poem.
| I.O.K.O 7/24/06 . chapter 1
Sounds personal. Best not intervene between what ever's going on, but it seems as if I've felt the same way at times.