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fairytale failure 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abuseUmm...relateable. Everyone has those days. well really more like moments, but it captures the moment very aptly.
Mortifer Amor Phasmus 2006-09-09 ch 1,	abuseHow very true, you captured the emotion well.
Complications 2006-09-05 ch 1,	abusetruth is I loved it.my teacher says "failing to prepare is preparing to fail" sad. this reminded me of that, sort of. It's like when you really want to try but you just can't, can't even try.
lordelfy 2006-08-12 ch 1,	abuseThe beginning seems so different from the end but they still connect, great job.
AchillesMonkey 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseGood! I feel that way sometimes.
myheartbelongstosuperman 2006-08-07 ch 1,	abuseAnother winner. I really love your poetry! It just makes so much sense to me because it sounds as if you're being totally honest about your feelings. The lines about not having any money were very clever, as well.
Seeker of the Way 2006-08-07 ch 1,	abuseGood! I liked it! It has a very nice emotional resonence to it, I could feel what it was saying. Kinda a glum type of depression?hey! my sister's name is Elzabeth but she goes by Liz! She is the yongest and I am the oldest of three.My sister can be a big ol' meanie head and her nae is Liz ...But I won't hold that against you. lol*you're getting a poe mpublished? Is it already done? Because, er, people hate when I do this. But, be careful if it is where they don't pay you or send you a free copy of the work it is in at least! If they make you BUY at least one of the boks, it's a TRICK! A very clever one, too. I know, I almost fell for this trick myself. So, don't feel bad either. You may say to yourself you have to buy it cause its you on paper! But ... well, it's your decision! Sorry, loads of people se my advice as 'butting in" or beign a "know-it-all" btu then they say after that that I "dont' know anything" how can I be both?Anyways ... hopefully they paid you for it and gave you a free copy adn I'm jsut being weird. I do that a lot. But I am nto a CREEP weird, just like thids weird. Oh, and the thing about doing dishes or whatever and totally getting some random line I HAVE to write down! weird like you!AND I thought your interview of yourself was FUN-NAY! I laughed out loud for real. that is my kind of humour! Cause I have a weird sense of humour.anyways .. thanks for taking the time to review my poem!
Lunatics Words 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuseit's how I think at times too
bahaghari 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuseThis one's really nice and emotive. Likes it.
Incognito Flamingo 2006-08-02 ch 1,	abuseI feel like that sometimes. Good poem.
not-really-susan 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuseHey cool, I feel like running away too LOL
leon Hart87 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abusei think that it was very good i like the endind where you said that i am too tired to do that that was really good i hope you thing gets published
breezy nostrils 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuselovely ranting. you left me with many questions. nice work.
Satanic Thoughts 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abuseWoah! Loved the poem, and the repetition (The truth is) gave a nice ring to it!! It is also very real and I for one could seriously relate to it!
sundaynightsky 2006-07-26 ch 1, anon.	abuse(sorry i cant be bothered to log in... lazy...) this is a great poem! i love the repetition of structure, it works really well. it sounds very sophisticated for someone of your age (i know how patronising that sounds... sorry... congrats, by the way, on maybe getting a piece published! i read it on your profile). ANYWAYS, i know the feeling you're describing, you've written it beautifully. :D

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