I'm sorry, but I found this story quite confusing, and it seemed to me (sorry if I misunderstood) that you were almost making fun of World War II at the end of your story, saying that the British were 'bulletproof' or something. World War II isn't exactly something to joke about, because many people lost their lives because of it.

FYI: You also had a few spelling and grammar mistakes.

This is my favorite story ever.

com on cant you think of a more interesting story WW2 is the past i suggest something based with out guns but this is my opinion