wow...this story is so good. the only thing good or bad don't know, but i don't know a lot about the characters by the seventh chapter. the last part there was really interesting. aiden seems to be an okay guy but i don't know if i like seth.

Interesting story and characters, though the little typos ruin the flow for me.

At first I was going to only review you for one chapter at a time, then come back, but in the end I read all three chapters. Okay, the chapters are very nice, they could possibly use some revising, but then again what doesn't, and I like they characters in it.

Ah, I have a feeling as to where this is going. Not bad, the spelling and grammar need to be rechecked in a few places, but not bad. Also, the beginning I think started sort of suddenly, perhaps there needs to be something else to really 'start' the story. Anyway, continue.