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| drippingdreams 2006-07-24 ch 1,   | Poignant, ethereal, beautiful... seriously amazing piece. I love the descriptions and the perspective. I have a story a little bit like this (or at least, this reminded me of it) called "The Path to Infinity and Nothing", but yours has a very different ending (mine doesn't end yet). Gotta Favourite this story. It's exquisite with just a touch of creepy. How she just... fades away. Even if it is kind of metaphorical. Or not. Either way I love it. |