Reviews for Insanity is One Step up From Reality

Reviews For: Insanity is One Step up From Reality

rhy-k 2007-03-07 ch 8,	GREAT WORK on the last few chapters. Sorry i haven't been reviewing but u have been reading. I cant wait to read the rest of it. This is so GOOD! watch your spelling and grammer.
Sock. 2007-02-24 ch 8,	I want David and Nathan to be t'gether... >>;; Anyways... >>;; Really good story. Love it. A lot. Can't wait for the next update. =D (Even though the most recent was basically t'day.) Only criticism is grammar. Need t' work on 'have' instead of 'of' and know what's 'no' and 'know,' 'their,' 'there,' and 'they're.' Y'know. All that good stuff. Homonymms suck; don't worry about it. Anyways, yeah. Great story. Too long of a review. >
Shadow1290 2007-02-24 ch 8,	It's really good! I can't wait to see what happens next MORE SOON please!
Shadow1290 2006-12-19 ch 7,	my god i really like this! MORE SOON please this is... its one of those storys that i get so into that i stop just so i can breath because its scary and at the same time i NEED to no wht happens~ so please update soon i really wanna no wht happens!!
kassie reddy 2006-12-11 ch 7,	That was a god chapter i didnt exspect any of that stuff too happenn..! that chapter was wickedd..kep up the good work and finish that story because its a amazing story and everyone should read itt...:)
Sarah ! 2006-12-07 ch 7,	Yay !! Its all Falling Into Place. I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter. = )
Sarah ! 2006-11-15 ch 6,	More ? Moo Moo Moo = )
Jessi 2006-11-14 ch 6,	Hey John! Omg! that was AMAZING!! it was great! I loved it. It was so sweet and loveable and everything!! it was really cute! I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out who the monster is.. thats when I find out right? the 7th chapter? but I hope that when David gets out that he ends up getting in a really big relation ship with Sarah and ends up asking her to marry him (no.. you should have him ask her that while he is in the hospital! it would be so cute!)and then they get married and have kids and live happily ever after!! that would be so adoible! I can't wiat for the next chapter!! loves ya!! xoxoxoxoxox Jessi Loo
Jessi Loo 2006-10-22 ch 5,	Hey! That one was really good. I finally got to read it and you weren't on msn so Im leaving you a review! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter!! Talk to you soon! love ya! - Jessi Loo
Sarah ! 2006-10-19 ch 5,	I Can't Wait For You To Update !!
rhy-k 2006-10-03 ch 4,	great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
rhy-k 2006-09-26 ch 3,	Setting down an outline for a stroy chapter by chapter is called [ i think] plotting. Here are some things i'm not too sure of : "father aloud me to go" shouldn't that be "father allowed me to go" "He was a younger man." Younger than who? The nurse? "I could of laughed"Shouldn't that be "I could have laughed" Now on to comments: LOL as soon as i saw the word mentor i though - GOT to be that blue haired kid from the washroom. And i was right. Heh why else would you him in, have him 'fight' with David then drop him. Anyways looking foward to next chappie.
umbrella.x 2006-08-07 ch 2,	Wow, this is an amazing story. I really love it. I think the father has something to do with the hallucinations. I don't know why, but I have a feeling he has something to do with it. Can't wait for the next one;Cristina (Ghost Of A Blizzard)
rhy-k 2006-08-07 ch 2,	hey great chapter, but there were two sentences that i didn't get : Don’t worry David --know ones-- going to get you” she then pointed to the nurses talking down the hall. isn't that suppose to be --no one-- ? and in the sentence “ You better --thin-- about ' is that suppose to be --think--? looking out for more updates!
rhy-k 2006-07-27 ch 1,	Good. Does the story end here? I hope not.

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