[Do not abuse it, do not harm yourself with it, do not harm your fellow classmates with it, etc. etc. blah, blah, blah… ] - Lol! Wow. I feel like I’m in class again.

[Giselle shrugged; two faint red spots had appeared on her own cheeks, though Celia wasn’t sure if it was the mention of Taylor that caused them or the ludicrousness of what she had suggested.] - I like the implications of that; it makes me wonder what Giselle might be up to.

[“Sometimes I get the feeling that he’s, well, different from us.”] - Ooh!! I wonder what that means! A totally new element and very interesting.

I like the part where the girls are teasing Giselle, it's cute. Also, the tension between Chase, Celia and the others is really developing nicely. I think your writing for this story gets a little better every time you post.

[Just when I thought I had dropped this story, lo and behold; more chapters] - LOL! I totally know the feeling.

The more you show of Chase learning about the power of Night, the more interesting it is. It's as if he's becoming a more and more complex character and it's fascinating to watch that happen. I almost feel like it's the slow birth of a potential villian who never meant to be a villian but a hero. It's cool.

[“Tired…” He tasted the word on his tongue.] - I like that idea that “tired” has a flavor.

[“The Power of Night is a strange thing. Perhaps it makes its user a slave to that power.” ] - That’s ominous. If I were Celia I’d be worried too.

I like the part at the end of the chapter where Chase appears to be arguing with himself or something inside him. Good chapter! Even though there weren't a large number of events, there was a lot of development of characters and relationships in this chapter.

I like how there are all these balancing powers and I absolutely love that May is discovering a new power. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

I like that Celia has chosen the exact opposite power of Chase, it adds another level of complexity to their relationship.

Interesting so far. I am ready to learn more about this world you're creating and be drawn into it.