konban wa

"Where is my heart? / Nowhere / And everywhere / All at once."

I liked that line. This whole poem sounded a bit childish... not like a child wrote it but more like it's written for children to read. Sort of like Dr. Seuss (however that's spelled). I don't know if that was the intention, but it did make it easy to read -- no complaints on that part, LoL.

Anyway, that line that I wrote above was mt favorite line. Never stop writing! :D

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-Shan-