Ha. Me and Chris have the same last name. Nice. :]

I loved it, but it was really really sad, and i didn't expect him to die. I have only ever seen one of the main charaters die once before in a book, but they came back to life, some how, and that was in the Vampire Diaries Books and I still don't understand how the girl came back to life, but I was happy she did! I still loved it thought

Aw, i aleady love your story, and Chris, i thinks he's funny. Can't leave a long review, got to read the rest.

WOW is all i can say i love the story line you are a amazing author

this story had a great plot and was extremely well written! cant wait for the sequel!!

Good story. :D

He... died? Sniff. So sad now.

Really beautiful writing though, I'm amazed. You are very talented.

And just wondering, how is this sequel going to work? I mean, the love of her life died. I want to see Fate happy again, but I feel like I'll have a grudge against anyone that isn't Chris.

er... not to be mean or anything but, i am so angry with you right now! that was a really sad and horrible ending and it made me cry!...i cant wait for the sequel!

Pretty good, ill give you that. keep going, i wnat to see the ending!

Great story! I really enjoyed reading this and though I am sad to see it end, I'm very satisfied with the outcome. Yeah, it's sad, but also realistic. Can't wait to read the sequel:)

aww so sad

oh he died. :(
lol
a bit of a twist there ... :)

amazing story, but where's the sequel?

F-ing amazing. I love it, especially the fact that it isnt the cookie-cutter happy ending. I cannot wait for the sequel!

Dear lord, you are an AMAZING writer.