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| Fantasy Real 2008-08-17 ch 19,  | abuseHe... died? Sniff. So sad now. Really beautiful writing though, I'm amazed. You are very talented. And just wondering, how is this sequel going to work? I mean, the love of her life died. I want to see Fate happy again, but I feel like I'll have a grudge against anyone that isn't Chris. |
| author-to-be-94 2008-06-24 ch 19, | abuseer... not to be mean or anything but, i am so angry with you right now! that was a really sad and horrible ending and it made me cry!...i cant wait for the sequel! |
| Bloodfeeder94 2008-05-07 ch 12, | abusePretty good, ill give you that. keep going, i wnat to see the ending! |
| AIPangel11 2008-01-14 ch 19, | abuseGreat story! I really enjoyed reading this and though I am sad to see it end, I'm very satisfied with the outcome. Yeah, it's sad, but also realistic. Can't wait to read the sequel:) |
| violet-eyez 2007-10-24 ch 19, | abuseaww so sad |
| moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-10-11 ch 19, | abuseoh he died. :( lol a bit of a twist there ... :) |
| Kar3b3ar 2007-08-28 ch 19, | abuseamazing story, but where's the sequel? |
| Maria Courtiarre 2007-07-17 ch 19, | abuseF-ing amazing. I love it, especially the fact that it isnt the cookie-cutter happy ending. I cannot wait for the sequel! |
| Maria Courtiarre 2007-07-17 ch 18, | abuseDear lord, you are an AMAZING writer. |
| Crimson Ara 2007-07-09 ch 19, | abuseThat was soo not the ending I exspected, but it was still good non the less. I can't wait to read the sequel. That should be interesting. -Crimson Ara |
| Vampire Queen 13 2007-07-08 ch 19, | abuseThe story was great, but the ending is so sad. I like it. |
| Lola Maria 2007-07-06 ch 19, | abuseI'm gonna hate this chapter...no Chris. *sigh* Oh well...you're prolly gonna end it some supercool way. OMG...I think this chapter is actually making me cry more. That's really awful. Maddie...that was beautiful. Truly beautiful. Your supernatural romance was amazing. The ending was superb and all the chapters had intrigue and excitement. You are a truly talented and wonderful author. I can't wait for a sequel or another one of your stories. Keep writing sweetie...it's a true gift you've got. Luvs and Hugs, (and even MORE tears), ~Lola Maria~ |
| Lola Maria 2007-07-06 ch 18, | abuseOkay, well you said this would make me cry. If it ruins my make-up I'll sue! JK...I just don't wanna cry. Well...here goes... Pestilent...nice vocab word...I didnt' expect that from you. Sorry, short review. I'm so wrapped up in the story that I can hardly find time to type. But I LOVE the twist of the Dream Walker being Chris's older brother. It's horrible and awful. Oh, he has a name...Lucas. good to know. OMG...that guy is so completely awful, not to totally state the obvious. I think he has some mental issues to get over... Oh Abbie...you made me cry. And I hate you! You killed off Chris, so I hate you! Jeez...you suck. Like, it's a good story, well written and all...but you killed Chris! Luvs and Hugs (and tears), ~Lola Maria~ |
| InsanePhoenix 2007-07-06 ch 19, | abuseIts such a sad ending :'( really good but sad *sniff* I loved it you did a brilliant job :) |
| ?> 2007-07-05 ch 19, anon. | abuseAWESOME STORY! i loved all the chapters, i was alittle dissapointed chris to die, but you ended it very well |