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| latino_ladi 2007-04-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis was a very interesting story. I have to agree there are some errors that I'm sure can be fixed but I myself CAN'T wait to read more of it. PLEASE keep it coming. You are a GREAT writer! |
| moon maiden of time 2006-09-01 ch 2,  | abuseyour grammar makes me twitch, eskimo-chan. The plot is good, but the WPP thing, is kinda like WTF? |
| laisse 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseI like this story and can't wait to read more! |
| LetsMurderTheSky 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseAwesome job, Stephy-kun. Very descriptive yet again. Very proud of you. I hope Sarah and her mother's lives will change for the better. I'm still hooked. |
| cormorant 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuse>.< bad grammar. (i'm a grammar nazi, afterall) Good story. *thumbthumbsagain* |
| LetsMurderTheSky 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAmazing Job Stephy-kun. Very descriptive especially when describing the abuse Sarah went through. Not many gramatical errors I could point out. It's very addictive. |
| cormorant 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWoot woot. There's more though, right? S'pretty good, Stepha, not bad at all. *thumbs* |