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Owl_of_Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 1
Thank you so much for the reviews! I chose this one of your submissions to review on, because I myself miss someone terribly, and it called to me. It's really good, simple but heartfelt, which is never a failure. Also, I have SUCH issues with paragraphs! Lol, my strategy is to just hit a line break whenever I feel like it lol, and in answer- Effoi-du-Vanc (i honestly forgot what inspired it) but I do remember it was just some silly, yet fun sounding thing. Effoi is just them, the Lett, San, and Vanc are just details- examplo...if this were used for earth peoples, it would be like... China-of- Assasin (backwards isn't it) i guess you can say i just made something up, lol. Sorry it doesn't mean anything very real :D But thankyou thank you for reading!! :D
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