 Nemonus 2007-07-04 . chapter 1lol! Mostly my laugh comes from "Invitation to Amuse", but the rest was clever too. You've got lack of spacing after the commas after the names.
(I hope you don't mind me reading this old stuff. I found you through drippingdreams, and am quite pleased I did.) |
 Violet Marx 2006-09-17 . chapter 1It made me laugh. ^-^
I can't find anything to critique. |
 Maya Paige Turner 2006-07-28 . chapter 1Just gorgeous!Loved it. Perhaps a voicemail system or "away message" for the Pantheon of Mt. Olympus next? |
 teena 2006-07-25 . chapter 1hehehe...Love it!
I wish I was a greek goddess so that I could have a cool voicemail...
ROCK ON! |
 drippingdreams 2006-07-24 . chapter 1I love love love love this. It's so clever, and such a play on words. That's what I love about your writing. Always. Favourites list for sure. |