I like this one. "Quixotic" is a fantastic word, and describes me much of the time. I like the rhyming & the beat, because it's not super regular or measured, but it flows. My favourite stanza is the "quixotic, neurotic" one, but the formatting on this annoys me (FicPress reformats when you upload and you have to go in and fix it by using backspace after every line and then shift+enter, which is the same as a single line break, or a < br > tag.) That way you can actually put stanzas in the way they're supposed to be.

Not that you'll ever get around to fixing this, but I figured if I told you exactly how to do it there'd be more of a chance.

I love how you connect words, and you never ever writing about stupid cliche teenage things.