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| Somewhere In Between 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abusei really like this one.. maybe not so much as the other ones.. but i think i might be missing something. it's still incredible though =) //Alex// |
| hateandkill-D 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseCool. I like this! Great job! |
| kelsi bones 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuse"they new me" should be "they knew me". "invisble" should be "invisible". Sorry to pick at the mistakes >.< I really like the way you did the ending, with one word on each line, then three on the last. It draws in your attention. Katrina |