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Somewhere In Between
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abusei really like this one.. maybe not so much as the other ones.. but i think i might be missing something. it's still incredible though =)

//Alex//
hateandkill-D
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseCool. I like this! Great job!
kelsi bones
2006-09-05
ch 1,
abuse"they new me" should be "they knew me".

"invisble" should be "invisible".

Sorry to pick at the mistakes >.<

I really like the way you did the ending, with one word on each line, then three on the last. It draws in your attention.

Katrina
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