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| StoryChris 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWe are souls residing in bodies - physical bodies which restrict our being. You've captured it so well. The rhythm and flow are natural, and the tone strikes a dark chord. Dividing the piece into sections increases its impact. Well done. |