BWAHAHA. That is absolutely hilarious. The first paragraph's descriptions could be no more perfect. There were several places where I feel could have used more description (the teleportation, for one thing). Again, that made me laugh - especially the "weakling" parts. XP

It reminded me of my Cantina story a wee bit. :]

That was weird. But funny. I like this. Please write more! ^_^

Haha!! Wow, that was hilarious...i'm still wiping the tears from my eyes. :) Great job guys! There were a few grammar mistakes (Very minor), but then, aren't there always? Pigeon.