 Harlequin Princess 2007-05-06 . chapter 1Wow I really like the last stanza it really surprised me. |
 gpshaw 2006-07-30 . chapter 1Sorry to burst your buble but there hasn't been single innocent person executed in the US since the death penalty was reinstated. THe fact that it requires 12 people to vote guilty, and to vote for the death penalty and the judge to uphold it AND the appeals court to uphold it pretty much eliminates the chance an innocent would die. |
 nectar in a sieve 2006-07-25 . chapter 1This was a very good piece of writing. Great emotions and I love the repaeting of:
Turn on the powerHook up the chairStrap in the prisonerPush the button
it really adds a lot to the poem.
Great emotion in this and you did a fantastic job of getting your point across, and I agree on it as well. |
 chocohound 2006-07-25 . chapter 1I loved the repition in this, and the overall message, meaningfully conveyed in the last stanza. Great! |