Whew, can really feel the heat in this one. "The space between has vanished for another day and I miss it" That was an unexpected line cuz usually when you love someone u don't want there to be any space, but it shows how space is good in a relationship too and how space can really be intriguing. Beautifully written.

This was nice. I liked the format that you chose to write with. Very unique. Well done.

ShadowFane

"Our bodies divided by a thin, invisible line of nothing" - beautifl line, beautiful piece.

i like it. good.~Liz