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| Xenochron 2008-01-26 ch 1,   | I really like your writing style, keep up the good work! |
| KillerOfClocks 2006-08-01 ch 1, | That last review was kinda' mean... >.> But I liked the style- ordinary styles catch the attention of more readers. When you catch the attention of readers, you can experiment and gamble with language (I think). It flowed really nicely, personally. I think what you pointed out is very realistic for many young authors- my worst nightmare, lol. Though I think the best authors do go out (and have a life) because their writing is more relatable, if not relatable- the reader can see where they're coming from. Personally short stories have little or no character developement, it gets to the point. Thank-you SO much for the long review- I wish I could be more helpful! ^_^() |
| Vickychan 2006-07-28 ch 1, | aw, that's sweet... your stuff's always so sad!! >_< but it's really good all the same, well-written and everything... lol but the glass is half empty, right? ^_^; haha i'd say this fic is me and you when we're old but it's really not, cos your gonna make it... this fic is ME when i'm old hahaha!! anyway, its good ^_~ im gonna read your poems now! |
| Archipelago 2006-07-26 ch 1, | First off, I hate Stephen King. You should have chosen a more universal author. He's a bestseller and all but he's not a grand literary figure who writes universal stories. Note: IMO. Anyway, I didn''t like the style. It seems too...ordinary. The summary drew me in more than the writing, which isn't a good thing. I felt some of the details lacked specificity. I assume you were trying to make the reader feel sympathetic or saddened or just feel what Cleo feels, but I'm just like whatever. Cleo isn't interesting, or very developed as a character. But then again, how much can you do in 1400 words? lol Long review ends now. |