I think this is really good! But, personally, I think it'd be better if you have her diary entries as she's going through every day experiences. You know, day by day sort of things. Then leading up to the ball. Then the wedding day or whatever. But that'd be more like book material. Anyways, great job

I liked it a lot! I don't know if this is going to be a story, or if it is just a diary entry. Either way it will turn out lovely.

I love recreations of the Cinderella story and I've never thought of this aspect before. I've always figured she didn't run away because, like in Ever After, she didn't want to abandon her estate. Anyway, good job with coming up with this. It's a refreshing view of a timeless classic.