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| a beginner 2008-06-17 ch 21,  | abuseits really interesting and well just update... :) |
| mell8 2007-12-01 ch 19, | abuseThis is excellent! Please update soon. |
| clair-a-net 2006-11-26 ch 19, | abusewell at least hes getting sleep now. he should tell more people so he wont be as stressed |
| clair-a-net 2006-09-24 ch 18, | abusehe really need to eat and not starve himself, why cant he tell some one or write it downwhat about the telepithey the bad guy shurly cant hear him mind speak. |
| clair-a-net 2006-09-24 ch 17, | abusego goodness thats not good hope hes all right |
| Raeveyna 2006-09-20 ch 18, | abuseLove this! Please continue :D |
| clair-a-net 2006-09-16 ch 16, | abuseWHY DID HE GO INTO A DEPRESION? AND THIS ADVANCED TRAINING CLASS SOULD BE INTERESTING. |
| clair-a-net 2006-08-26 ch 15, | abusewow what a revalation. so why and what is after him? |
| clair-a-net 2006-08-26 ch 10, | abusethat kinda makes it sound like the whole thing was staged. intresting. going to read more and find out what happends |
| call me ish 2006-08-02 ch 10, | abuseSucks butt that he got suspended!, but col taht Nic is going to train him :D |
| clair-a-net 2006-08-02 ch 8, | abuseah man that sucks i so thought that he would pull though and win ah well. so who is this guy anyways? |
| call me ish 2006-07-30 ch 8, | abuseDamn that guy has a lot of powers *grumbles*. Sad that Evan lost, but thinking this other guy would be an intresting character and hopefully he appears again soon. &nice job with writing this action/fight sequence. |
| drakunshanks 2006-07-29 ch 3, | abuseGood story so far...I like the world, but would like it even more if you explained it to me. You seem to have a problem with present and past tense that has been bothering me. I suggest you take a look at that. |
| Millie Foster 2006-07-28 ch 7, | abuseI really liked this! It's well written, and my freakishly picky self didn't see anything wrong grammatically- an awfully nice treat, let me tell you!Anyway, the title didn't really appeal to me, but the summary did; I'm excited for the next chapter! |
| call me ish 2006-07-28 ch 7, | abuseAwesome! :D &yey Nathan died!! (too bad he has to come back to life though :( ) |