 Ashelin 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Oh my gosh. I love this. I have always had a soft spot for wisdom (not that I am the wisest person of them all). I love the last two lines.
I also love the lines: "People will not lend their ear, To wisdom without cane and beard."
Great job, again. Such a great poet, you can't slack off again, OR ELSE! Haha, I don't know what I will do, but it will be something bad! Great job, and God bless! |
 trash can art 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Despite the hundreds of 'wisdoms' floating around, this was a pretty competent poem. The rhyming did not sound forced and flowed pretty well. Me likes.
I'd like to note something funny. At first glance, "People will not lend their earTo wisdom without cane and beard." looked to me like "People will not lend their CARTo wisdom without cane and beard."
I was oddly amused until I read it over. I like your version better. ;P |