aw it's very sweet...

Lots of Love, hugs n Kisses

Wow I love that poem. It's amazing, the top half reminds me of my sister. I've always tried to write something like this and never been able to but you did it perfectly. Magnificent.

wow... this is amazing... i can feel the power and meaning and strength of your feelings through these words... great job...

Powerful, painful stuff. Good work.

this, to me, goes from sounding almost childish to entirely more mature by the end; goes along with the narrator's changing opinion, her own growth.

also, "I don't want to toddle in your wake." while referring to a young child. A toddler. toddle, toddler... wonderful word usage.