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| rebellionVII 2007-02-22 ch 5,   | loved this chapter. love estrella's character so much. love aaron. hate kyle. love jackson. love your writing style. am tried. update soon. |
| rebellionVII 2007-01-06 ch 4, | hey! it's me again. i loved this chapter. this aaron guy sounds like my ex-turned-best-friend. i love situations like that. why did she run away? is she really that scared of going too fast? that's an interesting character development. i really like this story. please continue |
| rebellionVII 2006-11-09 ch 3, | I think you've got an awesome idea here. I really enjoy this story. Update soon, please. |
| behind these tears 2006-10-31 ch 3, | OMG! This is SO cute. Please update soon! |
| sparkle587 2006-08-11 ch 2, | I loved how she seemed so shy. Very cute. I can't wait to see what will happen when they start to talk! This story is really good. Good luck with the writers block. I hope we get to see another chapter of the orignal fic where the friends are picking up one of them's brother. I can't think of the name of it right now but I would love to see more of it!! ~felicia |
| Mrdarcylover 2006-08-10 ch 2, | I really like this it's good. I also approve of what Estrella is studying. Journalism YAY!!Well anyway...I hope you update soon |
| rockrose 2006-08-09 ch 2, | This is really, really good. I like it. |
| sparkle587 2006-08-09 ch 1, | This is very good. You should keep it going. Sorry I have no crit for you. I think it's very interesting, a great story line. ~felicia |
| S0ULd 0UT 2006-07-26 ch 1, | Your fic is very nice. [[: The only thing I don't like about it is the lack of detail. It may just be me and my obsession with details, but other than that, I look forward to the next chapter. -Psyten |