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drippingdreams 2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Listy goodness.

I like the repetition of "light her up" and its variations, and the last three lines end it perfectly. I also like "riddles rhymes / Little times."

Thanks for the R&R on "I am Not a Poet."
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