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| Ivya 2006-10-04 ch 1,   | I'm mad at you now. You stole my story. Die. |
| bITTer words 2006-08-07 ch 2, | Wow, this is a brilliant story. I would never want somebody reading my thoughts, it'd be to creepy. |
| Exonerated 2006-07-31 ch 2, | o.o I didn't expect another chapter so soon but nevertheless, that was nicely contrived. An author's best motivation is reviews is it not? Well here's another one! :) |
| JJSLAM2129 2006-07-27 ch 2, | Brilliant story you've got here! The writing is very simple and clear yet at the same time, powerful. I wonder where do such original plotlines come from? Not much to comment on mechanics wise. Please continue and soon! |
| Noihseret 2006-07-27 ch 2, | o... nice last words ^^ I was looking forward to reading this chapter and it's wonderful! you really do have a interesting story here. I can't wait to read more! |
| Noihseret 2006-07-25 ch 1, | this is really good! what a plot!! you wrote this perfectly too ^^ I want to know what's with that boy. He seems... weird. That last line was great too. An angel of God huh? this sound really good! I can't wait to read more!! |
| RinsedBlank 2006-07-25 ch 1, | You should really continue. The storyline is original, the direction is clear, and I'm positive it will be noted if only it progresses enough. Keep up the good work. |
| leon Hart87 2006-07-25 ch 1, | Very odd i like it though is this like going to be a major story cause it has a very very good plot lol i hope that you write on cause this is very good i know advice is very good at some times but on the 4th line you forgot to capitalize "you" its okay cause if you go to mine you can find so many lol i know i am working on it i hope that the next one comes out soon |