Hey there! Your summary for your story sounded interesting, so I decided to give it a peek. I noticed a lot of spelling and grammer errors, and that's not including the obvious ones you placed in Jud's letter. Some of the things you describe do not seem very realistic, like the note that Jud sends Mick. The part about him crying as he was writing the letter just didn't make sense. That's not the way men were back then. I liked how you incorporated how they met, and that you have introduced a female character into the mix. Keep it up!

Good. You should update...but just for a few pointers, i'd try and write a little bit more on the surroundings. Tell us what this nurse sounds like, looks like. How does hearing her make Mick feel? Is he bitter towards her? Dialogue is great, but there is always more. Treat the five senses as your best friend. However, the story has potential. His arm would be a big thing...how did he lose it? How much did it hurt? Bla bla bla...Looking forwards to an update!DITWW