Its a pretty good story but the characters seem so childish.

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wow thats amusing to read...

I DONT HAVE FIRE TRUCKS!

forr the love of God! i DONT have freaking fire trucks.

blue flames, though, thats a different story, but NO fire trucks!

You wickedly evil person! That last scene was TOO MUCH.
Haha, I love you anyways.
But now I go hide from Sean and/or Tyler.

that was totally wicked awesome

Damn good. Probably the best short story i've read in along long time.

yay! i liked the other ending to! hehe ^_^

Sean makes the cutest father EVER!

Yay! Happier ending! Me likes more

well, not much else to say but:

:)

aw! i'm cryin gat the moment! it was so touching! *cries*

I FEEL SO SPECIAL! The Pope performs the marriage ceremony!

And I'm still blushing madly about the "great sex" part. Can I get back at Sean for that in the "Deleted Scenes" chapter?

Wah! Is this the end? So sad... she kills herself! So many people die *sob* The first few chapters were so happy! *pokes* you must write another story!

T_T so tragic...At least part of the ending of this story was happy. But too often happy endings are never realistic. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this story, and look foward to reading more of your work.

Regards,

Edward

holy **, was that a heavy chapter

That was a very disturbing cliffhanger, and I'm still confused...I hope you will write more, if not on this story but on a new project perhaps?Looking forward to reading more,-Edward