Beauitful. The title is wonderful. I love the imagery this displays. It just blows my imagination, seriously.

Love it. Keep writing!

- Violet

Ohh, this is a very pretty poem! Love the formatting - not overdone at all.

♥Christine

Aww. Sad. I LOVE the title. It feels very... familiar. I know the Phoenix syndrom all too well. I love this. The imagery is amazing. My favorite lines were "but even still I --/explode/into a/d.a.z.z.l.i.n.g flurry of all we were/((recombine me, Dear))" and I totally get why you used them in the summary. I also loved the last part, about crashing and burning. Yeah. I do that a lot. haha. Bravo. Your stuff is so... inspiring. I'm like "duude, I want to write like that!"

Beautiful, I like the way you wrote this, it makes it have more impact :D

beautiful and cold. Love the snow imagery. like how it starts cold, then ends hot. moving and very well written with the imagery right there in your face so you can clearly see it.

That was good, great imagery. It almost sounds sarcastic, you know, how it says one thing, then another different thing. I like that kind of stuff. Keep at it, this one looks like a winner.

Great i loved it!! it made sense to me! you have great poetry! better then my little notes... anyway did u get any of your poems published?

very nice. i loved those last lines.

beautiful structure and shape. it seems strange with all this talking of blizzards and snowflakes cos its very very hot here! anyway, i love the style and the imagery is beautiful. :D