this story is easier to understand than the other one. :). i like this story, update soon!

yay a prequel... this is such an intresting story.. keep up the good work and update soon.

I like that one too!

It happens all very fast, but it doesn't seem rushed. The fastness seems to fit^^

I am really looking forward to find out how Cheating Life and The Chronicles of the Five Pillars belong togheter!

Wow. I don't know who to root for. I think Palantha is cute and goofy, but I find Gyriem mysterious and interesting.

It is a little confusing, but I think that's one of the good things about your stories. It makes me want to keep reading to understand. You've got me hooked.

Amazing job really.

Serason

Ah! now I understand who's Palantha and everything... :D

UPDATE SOON!!

I am extrememly intrigued, and can't what to find out more about it. Keep the good work

very interesting this is! i like it so far, so plz update again soon!