|Reviews for My Misery|
| Elewyn 7/26/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this poem, and especially the bit in itallics haha...one thing, when you did "Jaded tears pooled into the bowl" it broke the whole poem to bits. You had a rhythym (sp, never knew how to spell that lol), and this doesn't fit. Same with the next line. Otherwise, perfection.