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| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-08-25 ch 1,   | Oh...I love how your poems always seem to hit your ideas right on the head...and I always seem to relate...keep it up.--pammy-- |
| simpleplan13 2006-08-25 ch 1, | sad and beautiful.. I like the repition |
| Hidden Lies 2006-07-30 ch 1, | I just hope that this poem isn't about what we just talked about. I hate to think I have ever made you feel as if our friendship was breaking. I think I have told you everytihng that had needed to be said. on the poetic side, it is a great poem, full of raw emotion and very well expressed. I do agree with many of the other reviews, I think this could be a song. |
| Autumn Reflections 2006-07-29 ch 1, | dude, my internet is working! swet! btw, the puppy is momentarily called Tzutique Cloak n dagger. SCared? I am... anyway, this poem is absolutely beautiful! keep writing claire |
| fragileHeart101 2006-07-26 ch 1, | i like the line... this year will change, i hope we stay close'. excellent josh :) luvers u x |
| HiddenFlame42 2006-07-26 ch 1, | Very well written piece here. The emotions are strong and your technique is good. Hope you're doing okay! *hugs* |
| Princess-anna57 2006-07-26 ch 1, | This really sounds like it be a song! Wow, this is really good! I really like it Josh! :) Well done. Keep doing all that you do! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Melanie Layugan 2006-07-26 ch 1, | Whoa. Very sad and haunting.. it has me thinking Josh. I like the flow of this. Keep on writing. Melanie |
| katie 2006-07-26 ch 1, | josh...i will NEVER leave u...u kno u mean the world to me...i said i love u once and i shall say it again..i love you...ur the best thing tat ever happened to me! *BIG HUGS* |
| Jess 2006-07-26 ch 1, | OMFG! I...WOW!!=P i know u have it under as poetry but this cld also b a really gd song!! i luv it so much! =) Jessie-K8 |