So, if those women start breaking your heart too, will you become asexual all of a sudden? I'm not saying that your skill is bad, just that what the poem portrays isn't exactly all that well thought out. But, hey, that's what we writers write for: a way to express ourselves. Good poem, bad facts.

You have just been finding/getting yourself the wrong men. Because you might just as well get awfully sick of the wrong women. A sexual orientation goes beyond the threshold of bad luck in love life.

Because men hurt you enough to turn around for a while doesn't make you a lesbian. I am a lesbian, I like girls, I've liked girls since I've been alive. That's a lesbian. You're just a hurt girl. Go love boys, not all of them are assholes, and you know what? Not all girls are sweet either, I've been dating girls for years and years. Most of them are crazy bitches.

short but exactly right! loved it! keep writing ;)

Lol; I'm amused and a bit offended.

Amused: 'cause it's a bit funny XD and KINDA true...

offended: sexuality cannot be described as that. xD i'm pretty darn sure a straight girl can't just all of the sudden turn 'lesbian' because she's tired of men. If she can, then she was never straight to begin with! (possibly bisexual...)

It happens.

Just gotta be careful for those women heartbreakers (See Maureen from RENT) I like the way this was written. Says a lot in so few words.

wow. u suck ass!

Hm... I think inb the second line, you should have "shattered" instead of "shatters"...

This is very good! Nicely done.

By the way, I added you to my msn contact list... lol -)

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maybe its not all because of heartbreaks so a woman turns to another woman, it is more than that and more complicated

Yeah, guys suck...They can be fun, but they get overwhelming.

Happy Writing-WWKrandomity

Intriguing portrayal.

Hey, that does happen in real life. I like it 'cause it's true.