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| the knight of your tales 2006-07-27 ch 1,  | loved it. very good writing.it flows very well. makes perfect sense. i understand everything in it and didn't know how well you could write about it all.Until i read this. :: bows :: well done deary. |
| thedarkthatiwas 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | *points to the reviws below this* All that... all that. This is great. It's... somehow beautiful, it's really great writing, it's... I don't know. Emotive? Evocative, certainly. I like the use of all the italics and bolding and underlining, and all the parentheses... ..it was GREAT. I mean, it IS great. It's a superb piece of writing... did I say that before? Maybe. Oh. I LOVES. It's so great. And then the whole good-luck-for-the-job-interview thing, I DO mean it, it's just... yeah. So overused, and under-meant... under in the sincerity. *shrug* But I mean it. You got this far... ...keep on moving on ahead. ~Aquila XX |
| Darthen 2006-07-26 ch 1, | Not bad. In fact, it was really good. My eyes were glued to the screen as I read every word. Few on this site can claim that. It was really good. I hope your interview went well. Have a good one. |